NDP's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[C_KICK_Just Starting_C_KICK]

uhmyeah

i suggest not making a song based on going down every key one at a time...theres something called key progression and if you want to correctly fdo that without souding newbish than maybe you should learn composition.But at least you tried.

C-KICK responds:

thanks for reviewing this, and I am looking for any help on the net or from people as to how to compose properly. I am shure that it sounds newbish but i am a newb so it is hard to not sound newbish.

[Bloody Tears]

ok

dude taking a midi and imorting it into your program and changing the instruments...isnt making a song. That goes for everyone out there.

ninboy90 responds:

I haven't seen this song anywhere else.What the hell are you talking about.What I meant by original was something diffrent than doom music and stuff.Thanks for your unconstructive criticism.

[Cursed (redone)]

it was ok

it was ok, but it way too random, random sounds just come in and out...
that was very annyoing..Build up your song dont leave the listener hanging/

[All Around Piano Piece]

ok

plz, im a pianist, and this hurts my ears...sometimes it wasnt even harmonized correctly and its just random and reapeated notes...but i commend you for effort at least...seemed too empty

keep going but plz, learn to harmonize.

Foreverkul responds:

Well, yes i know. I took piano lessons a few years ago, but stopped when we moved. That makes this years old. Now im a bit rusty. But i created this from scratch on the computer program, i never played it on a piano.

[Spawn28 - Turn Up The Bass]

awesome

uhm its good but that acid noise sucked!!! lol you need more diversity and amelody

spawn28 responds:

your an acid noise? lol

[Spawn28 - Arabian Knights]

cool

thats cool! Good job, kickits lots better to now, but still needs work

spawn28 responds:

maybe, maybe

[*-=]Tainted Methods[=-*]

awesome

all yu needed in that was a stronger kick and maybe a backround arping melody and ythis would of made top 10 nice job

Nicolas...

[.....Underwater .....]

ok

well i suggest you take a few piano lessons because doing random shit on a piano roll deosnt count as being a music producer. By the way theres something called HARMONIZATION. The transitions were horrible. BUT i do admire the effort put into this. So i wont give you a 0. I have some pointers. Seriously you seem like you have a hidden talent at puttin everything together so please do everyone a favor take some courses and youll be set to make great music i swear. Because if you learned about harmonization with all the different major and minor keys and the tonal transitions fromone to another you wouldnt have to sit there doing random shit on the piano roll all day..

anways,

peace and respect man.

Nicolas...

[«SERNITY» [Loop] .:Dj Spada:.]

hey

hey djspada, this is great, one thing though,if oyu want to correctly loop it, just mute allsounds at the end,(also regulate at begining)and them when you save, do vut remainder. I think you should make the loop longer, and that whole first part, you make it filter up to about 75%(not the strings) the strings you make it go to 75% volume. Then well you work the magic by adding a kick bass. You know, id be real interested towork on this damnit lol...alright, now im sad...Collab?

Nicolas...

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DjSpada responds:

Hey NDP! First of all thx for your advice! it seems like you know alot about FL. I would love to do a colab! It would help me get better with the program. Add me to msn
at: [e-mail] or email me and let me know when your free to start!

thx for your review!

BYE!

[The Final Hour]

hey

its me again, hey i can tell that you now have vamgaurd, Yes! Good job on this, u didnt you same instrumetns or at least not all the same so thats good, has better quality too. Keep it up

Nicolas...

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